Reviews for CinderPhoenix

BY : komodobutterfly


  • From QueenAyame109 on September 26, 2015

    OMG this story is very very promising. I loved the opening and appreciate the unique twists you've already put into the setup of the story. I can't wait for the ball to start rolling and more chapters to be updated. I very much look forward to it and can't wait to see more.

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  • From miles on September 23, 2015

    I think it's very promising. :)

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  • From ANON - smint45 on September 22, 2015

    nice start I'd like to read more!!!

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  • From ANON - Rukia Isaioi on September 22, 2015

    Few, my wifis working again!!! Tried reviewin last night but got jack:-(
    Anyway, I LOVE the twists of this Cinderella story!!! The closest thing Ive read 2 it was a soso hp ff, & it seems 2 me u avoided those mistakes well. So question: what's the ratio of alpha:beta:omega n this world??? Cause I don't think u named any betas. PS shouldn't mpreg b n the summary??? Plz update soon!!!
    Rukia

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  • From ANON - d.ude on September 21, 2015

    I love it! It's so hard to find stories about omegas that aren't mpreg lol. Update soon!

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  • From Haise on September 21, 2015

    I really love everything I read so far. It would be great to see more!

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  • From ANON - jj on September 21, 2015

    I really like this story so far! I can't wait so see what happens next!!

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  • From Tahn on September 21, 2015

    Interesting start. I like how Phoenix's personality comes through so well. I can't wait to see what changes await him.

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  • From SweetTooth on September 21, 2015

    Please continue this story it sounds amazing

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