Reviews for Taking it All

BY : Payton_Leeroy

  • From loveseeker on May 08, 2016

    I've been waiting for this update for far too long. Thank you for this. Great chapter. Would love to read more!

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2014

    I dont want to be mean I love the story but i cant understand the relationship with girl. Its stupid :/

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  • From Lisa on October 30, 2014

    All I can say is "Ouch!" lol

    Well, I'll tell you, Peyton, I can't see Perty sitting there like Neil did. Hmmm, wonder if she's into pain? If not, then I can't see how happy Jerit would be with her since he certainly likes to administer the pain.

    And I was just waiting for the curtains to be drawn back and the whole school getting a look at what the boys were doing! lol

    Glad you're back, Peyton! :)

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  • From loveseeker on October 29, 2014

    I'm so happy when I saw that this was updated! Another hot chapter for Jerit and Neil! :)

    ¡°Good, because I never plan to let you go. You are mine forever.¡±
    This story is somewhat a prequel to Whatever it Takes, right? So I really wonder what happened to them that had Neil gone in their lives in the sequel.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Lisa on May 31, 2014

    What a chapter!!!

    How generous is Perty?? She bought him a new bike!! And she took them out for my favorite thing: sushi. If Neil had actually dipped the sushi in soy sauce it would taste much better.

    I can't believe Jerit carved his initials onto Neil's skin. That's gotta hurt.

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  • From loveseeker on May 28, 2014

    Finally an update! Thank you for this! :)

    Wow! I love this chapter! So full of Jerit/Neil moment! I want more! I'm dying for moooore! T_T

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  • From loveseeker on March 27, 2014

    I'm REALLY dying to

    I've read this in one go and I really love it! I didn't expect Perty to come into their lives though but this is getting really interesting. Though I am really hurting for Neil. Poor him :'( I also did not expect Jerit to fall inlove with Perty that fast and I wasn't even expecting him to be in another serious relationship in the first place! But I still love this story, I'm a masochist like that. haha. I just hope Jerit won't choose Perty over Neil though. And I can't imagine how hurt he will be once Jerit and Perty starts their own family. He probably should have wish it was a guy Jerit was seeing instead of a girl. Oh my god! I just wish things would not go that far.

    Looking forward for the next chapter! :)
    I have a bad feeling something bad will happen though. Oh no no..

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  • From ANON - bambi4real on March 26, 2014

    Having read whatever it takes and not having heard of Neil in that story it makes me really nervous now with all this talk about saving other people first. I think the whole story I have been waiting find out if Neil dies or has a major falling out with Jerit hence he is not in their lives in Whatever it takes.

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  • From Lisa on March 25, 2014

    Hmmm, why do I feel that Neil just made a promise to the devil? lol I like how the mafia kingpin and Neil "bonded" over Perty and Jerit's safety. lol

    But what the hell was with the other guy? And how did he know what Neil had been up to?

    Great chapter, Payton! :)

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  • From Lisa on March 08, 2014

    Payton, you're back!!!!!!!!!Thank God! Boy, I missed this story! I had to reread the last two chapters to re-familiarize myself with the story!

    I'm so glad Neil was able to get out of that dangerous mess with that nasty lady. I just don't like Neil going out and being all mercenary. It would be great as long as there was no chance of him getting hurt. :)

    So, Perty is now in a poly relationship. That's what they're called, right? Jeez, it's hard enough for me to find ONE guy! I can't imagine finding TWO to live with! lolol

    Great chapter, Payton! Don't disappear for so long next time, huh? ;)

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  • From Lisa on November 24, 2013

    I'd be just as heartbroken if I were Neil. I also thought Jerit was going to just bring people home and screw them, not bring them home to have dinner with him and Neil.

    They're still in high school though, right? So is Perty a bit older than they are?

    I have heard of "Whatever it Takes". I clicked on it to see if I read it and I haven't yet. So yeah, I'll have to check it out. :) Thanks for the info, Payton! =)

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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on November 23, 2013

    Great story and I don't know how I missed it before but will try and be more careful in the future! You are a great writer and very talented too! Good job and hope to read more soon.

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  • From Lisa on November 22, 2013

    Payton!!! Thank you for the shout-out!!!! :)

    This story is so good - I have NO idea why other readers aren't r&r'ing it. :( Lazy sob's...j/k

    Hmmm, I thought Jerit was into guys. I guess both. So he's beaming b/c he met some chick. That was pretty callous of him considering he must know how Neil feels about him.

    I loved reading about the ripping out carpets and putting re-sanding the hardwood floors underneath. At least they weren't plywood! We ripped out carpet (too much dog piss smells, lol), and it was plywood underneath. Now the hardwood floor guys are putting in new floors.

    As always, can't wait for the next update, Payton! :)

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  • From ANON - arweneveningstar on November 22, 2013

    I really like your story!

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  • From Lisa on November 21, 2013

    I get nervous every time Neil goes out on his 'vigilante' mission. I just don't want him getting hurt. :(

    I think Neil should see a doctor in regards to the sex. He should rule out anything physical first, and then he should see a therapist. He's gotta get to the bottom of this (pardon the pun, lol), otherwise he's going to be miserable b/c Jerit's gonna be bringing boys home all the time and he knows that he's not the one pleasing him. I think eventually for the both of them, it will turn resentful.

    I like the idea of their own house though. :)

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